am i always acting awfully,
between the bruises and the bumps?
can i close my creaky closet,
do my dreams downward dump?
eating everything that echoes,
fast and furious are my feelings.
growing greatly graciously,
having horrific feelings.
inside i'm interestingly intimidating
so, just jump in.
killing my kicking knowledge,
leaping from lazy limbs.
my mind meanders motionless,
not nestling near.
opening others offers,
pleasing precious peers.
queens quite quietly
rest ready with rewards
seeing somebody sweet,
to talk and tangle towards.
understanding upsets us
very carefully we validate
while we wait willingly
xoxo's will excruciate
you're young and youthful
zigging and zagging.
mehhhhhhh.
MAGGIE! You did it!!
ReplyDelete"inside i'm interestingly intimidating
so, just jump in."
I like this a lot. Perhaps because the "so" throws you off, as you're expecting a "j" to come first. Very cool.
Maggs, this is really cool. I think the best part is not the idea itself but that you managed to make an actual poem out of a very narrowing format. *Fucking Applause*
ReplyDeletehey thaaaanks to both of you. :)
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